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Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.”

Personal Insight Question (or PIQ) #1, or the “leadership” question, can feel like a hard puzzle for students. Our students often feel like they’ve contributed to the world around them but do not themselves identify as “leaders.” Other students feel they’ve done so much as leaders, they don’t know how to fit so much involvement into an essay of 350 words.

Well, for every puzzle, there is an opportunity! And at Blue Stars, we define every student who has contributed to the world around them as a leader and help them showcase their unique ways of taking initiative in their response to this tricky prompt.

So let’s see how any student who has made a positive difference can use this prompt to their own admission advantage!

First and foremost, before you do anything, your very first step is to read, dissect, and understand the prompt.

Understanding and dissecting the essay prompt: the importance of this step cannot be overstressed – it’s your guiding light throughout your essay-writing process. A beautifully crafted essay that answers the wrong question is a missed opportunity, potentially leaving the reader amused or, at worst, concerned about your attention to detail, and eligibility for their school.

For instance, in the context of PIQ #1, the essay prompt’s central theme is leadership, but a closer examination reveals it further specifies three different dimensions of leadership:

  1. Positively influencing others
  2. Resolving disputes, and
  3. Contributing to group efforts over time.

You are not required to address all three dimensions. Rather, you are encouraged to pick one area that you can explore in depth.

Even more interesting is the wording of the prompt, which suggests an inclusive and broad interpretation of leadership that goes beyond holding an official title or position in a club or organization. The focus here is not merely on the role you held but on how you actively contributed to group efforts and facilitated collaborative problem-solving. Therefore, a specific event or anecdote that clearly showcases one of the three aspects of leadership is what your University of California reader is looking for.

Now that you’ve studied the prompt, how do you write the essay? Here are 7 tips to help you brainstorm, organize, and evaluate your essay for effectiveness.

  • 1

    Select a specific event: Students should choose a particular event or project that highlights one of the three options in the prompt. Rather than presenting a list of activities, focusing on a single event allows for a deeper exploration of the applicant’s role and impact.

  • 2

    Go beyond formal organizational titles: We suggest an emphasis on contributions made and the positive effect on the group. Since your activities list already notes positions held in clubs or organizations, your collaborative problem-solving abilities or positive influence on group dynamics will more effectively demonstrate leadership skills in your essay.

  • 3

    Avoid martyr narratives: Applicants should avoid portraying themselves as the sole hero who single-handedly took charge. That model of leadership died in the 20th century. The 21st century is all about collaboration, which means that admissions readers these days are much more interested in how applicants worked with others to make a difference. In this essay, it’s important to highlight your ability to get things done effectively as part of a team.

  • 4

    Consider unconventional leadership interpretations: Traditional leadership roles aren’t the only way to showcase your abilities.

  • 5

    Maintain a balanced tone: Striking the right tone is vital. Be sure to include some humility while showcasing achievements and experiences, leaving a positive impression on your reader.

  • 6

    Showcase positive influence: One of the main aspects of this prompt is illustrating how your leadership positively influenced others. Discuss specific ways your actions made a difference and provide concrete examples of your impact. This could be the first part of your concluding paragraph, or upshot!

  • 7

    Demonstrate growth and reflection: Reflect on how this experience affected you as a leader and an individual, and discuss how it has shaped your leadership style and future goals. This could be the second part of the last paragraph, leaving your reader with an impression of a human being who constantly evolves, an important trait of any leader.

Ultimately, effective responses to UC PIQ #1 demand careful consideration and attention to detail. To be most successful, we encourage students to start early, allowing ample time for revisions. Remember, the UC essays are not just about the result but the process of personal growth and self-reflection. With the right approach, you can craft a standout essay that showcases your unique leadership qualities and contributes to a successful college application.

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At Blue Stars, we specialize in guiding students through the essay writing process. Our expert team will help you create an exceptional essay that reflects your unique interests, experiences, and aspirations. Contact us today to get started on your journey to crafting an impressive UC application that stands out from the crowd. Your academic passion deserves to shine – let us help you make it happen!

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About the Author: Amy Morgenstern

Dr. Amy Morgenstern, affectionately known as Dr. M, is the founder and CEO of Blue Stars Admissions Consulting. She holds a Ph.D. in philosophy and an MFA in contemporary art. A former professor of philosophy, honors program associate director, and assistant to the director of the Aga Khan Program for Islamic Architecture, Dr. M brings a wealth of academic and multicultural experience to her practice.